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©2008-2009 ~masochisticcannibal
:iconmasochisticcannibal:

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This poem was an experiment to see if I could tell a complete story in the form of a list.

I like how the motivations of the list writer appear to change as the list goes on:

(flowers, chocolates, wine): light romance, possibly a first date

(blindfold, rope) something more serious and kinky

(tarp, shovel) murder, cold and passionless.

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:iconemxcore:
It worked.
I loved it.

--
<Life throws at you whatever it can pick up, you're not taught how to jump - you learn that yourself>
:iconmasochisticcannibal:
thanks. it's always good to make crap people enjoy.
:iconemxcore:
indeed. no worries.

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<Life throws at you whatever it can pick up, you're not taught how to jump - you learn that yourself>
:iconi-am-resisty:
Very nice.
Made me chuckle in a "morbid story well told" way.

--
"Talking much about oneself can also be a means to conceal oneself."
--Friedrich Nietzsche
:iconmymorbidfairytale:
wow how creative and original.
Im impressed with the idea and even more so with the execution.

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December 26, 2008
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